HEDDA REDUX

an alternative ending

Will Stackman
Aug. 2004

based on the venerable Archer translation
of Ibsen's play


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DR, an armchair, a footstool by a imaginary stove, firetools nearby.
UL a writing table with two chairs, covered with handwritten papers.
UC Fancy curtains, closed, leading to the music room

BRACK in the armchair. HEDDA center, JORGE & THEA at table
The characters address the audience in theatrical lighting

HEDDA (Center stage)

You know me as Hedda Gabler. A few days ago, I returned from my honeymoon in France to this house, an estate purchased by my new husband, Jorgen Tesman, a University lecturer. (Moves up toward him). The money came from a mortgage on the home of his maiden aunts, Julia and Irina, who raised him.

BRACK (From his chair)

I hold that mortgage. They call me Judge Brack. A former suitor of Hedda Gabler, the late General's daughter, I'm rather fond of other men's wives. She however was only interested in the romantic ideals of Eilert Lovborg who left town unexpectedly. Lovborg returned while the happy couple were abroad. Because of a recent sensational book, the wayward scholar became a rival for poor Jorge's promised position at the University--with my support. Of course, things have changed dramatically today. Lovborg died of a gunshot wound to the gut at the establishment of a certain Mademoiselle Diana. The manuscript of his second book, which promised to make him really famous, has mysteriously vanished. Actually, I think Hedda may have burned it, in this very stove.

THEA

But Eilert Lovborg's work will survive, even though he told me he tore it to pieces and threw it into the fjord. The book was created with my help while dear Eilert was tutoring my children in our small provincial town . I'm Mrs. Thea Elvsted. I actually went the same school as Hedda; I was younger than her of course. I left my country home to follow Eilert here to the city; he inspired me so. And I brought all the original notes for his book with me.

JORGE

I am Jorgen Tesman. I'm very fond of research, as my wife will tell you. I've made it my mission to reconstruct Lovborg's ground-breaking book from these original papers. It will mean abandoning my research on medieval French domestic arrangements, unfortunately. I feel responsible for my wife's actions. Aunt Julia says Hedda's expecting. Thea here will be invaluable in this monumental task. We're all mourning my poor old Aunt 'Rina.; she just died. I'll miss her, though dear Aunt Julia is still here. She made me these slippers.

HEDDA

I told Jorge earlier this evening that I burned Lovborg's manuscript because I couldn't bear seeing my husband overshadowed. He's very trusting. But Brack knows something he's not telling me, something about the pistol I secretly gave Lovborg when he was here ranting this morning. (Pause) It's time all this came to an end.

Lights change slowly as Hedda moves to start the scene

HEDDA.

Behind THEA's chair, rufflng her hair, gently
Well, my darling Thea,--how goes it with Eilert Lovborg's literary monument?

THEA.

Looks up at her dispiritedly,papers in hand
All his original notes will be so terribly hard to put in order, Mrs. Tesman.

JORGE. Making piles of paper

We'll manage it, eh? Arranging other people's papers is just the work for me, Hedda.
HEDDA goes over to the stove, sits on the footstool., facing front.
BRACK rises and stands over her, leaning on the armchair
.

HEDDA.Whispers.

You said something about my pistol, Judge Brack?

BRACK. Softly.

Lovborg must have stolen it.

HEDDA. Immobile

Stolen one of my pistols?

BRACK

Any other explanation would be unthinkable, Mrs. Hedda

HEDDA looks up at him , BRACK glances down at her.

Lovborg visited here this morning. No?

HEDDA.

Yes.

BRACK.

You were alone with him here?

HEDDA.

Briefly.

BRACK.

You never left this room ?

HEDDA.

No.

BRACK.

Think back. Weren't you out of the room, even--briefly?

HEDDA.

Perhaps for a moment. I went in to the piano. Pointing upstage

BRACK.

Your pistol-case was where at that time?

HEDDA.Still pointing

I keep it locked up in ---

BRACK. Looking at the table

Where, Mrs. Hedda?

HEDDA.Pause

The case was there on the writing-table.

BRACK.

Are both your pistols still there?

HEDDA.

I haven't felt like shooting anything yet today.

BRACK.

I must tell you I saw the pistol taken from Lovborg's pocket. The same pistol I saw here yesterday. In this room. When you almost shot me out there in the garden.

HEDDA.

You've brought it back to return it, of course?

BRACK.

Unfortunately the police kept your pistol.

HEDDA.

The police ? Whatever will they do with it?

BRACK.

Try to find its owner, of course.

HEDDA.

Do you think that likely?

BRACK.Bends over her and whispers.

No, Hedda Gabler -- as long as I say nothing.

HEDDA.Looks frightened at him.

If you do not?

BRACK.Shrugs his shoulders.

It's possible your pistol was stolen.

HEDDA.Firmly.

Death rather than that.

BRACK.Smiling.

People say such things -- they never do anything about them.


HEDDA.Without replying.

Supposing my pistol was not simply -- stolen. What then?

BRACK.

My dear Hedda--then the scandal starts!

HEDDA.

The scandal!

BRACK. Moving

Yes, scandal. That appalls you, doesn't it, Mrs. Hedda. You will, of course, be brought before the inquest -- you and Mademoiselle Diana. She will have to explain just what happened in her rooms. Was it an accident or murder? Did your pistol go off as Lovborg was trying to get it out of his pocket, perhaps to threaten her, or whatever mad act he intended ? Did she grab for it , accidently shoot him below the belt, and push your gun back into his pocket? That would be quite like her. She is an energetic young person, our Mademoiselle Diana.

HEDDA.

But I have nothing to do with such repulsive business. I don't even know this Mademoiselle Diana.

BRACK.

No. But you will have to answer one question: Did you give Eilert Lovborg your pistol? People will draw conclusions, whatever you answer

HEDDA. Lets her head sink.

I hadn't considered that.

BRACK.

You're in no danger, my dear Hedda, as long as I say nothing.

HEDDA. Looks up at him.

So I am in your power, my dear Judge. Pause
You have me at your beck and call, from this time forward.

BRACK. Whispers softly.

Believe me, Mrs. Hedda, I shall not abuse my singular advantage.

HEDDA

None the less, I am subject to your will--and your demands, A slave!
Rises impetuously. Never!

BRACK.Looks half-mockingly at her.

People generally accept the inevitable, my dear.

HEDDA.Returns his look.

Perhaps.

BRACK sits back in the chair .HEDDA crosses to writing-table.

Well? How are you two getting on, Jorge? Mocking  Eh?

JORGE. Cheerful

Heaven knows, darling. In any case all this cross-referencing will take months.

HEDDA.

Fancy that! Passes her hands softly through THEA's hair.
Doesn't it seem strange to you, Thea? Here you are sitting with Jorgen Tesman
--just the way you used to sit in your house with Eilert Lovborg.

THEA.

If I could only inspire your husband the same way!

HEDDA.

Oh, inspiration will come--in time.

JORGE.

Yes, you know, Hedda--I do think I begin to feel something like that. Pats THEA's hand. But why don't you go and keep Judge Brack company again? Eh?

HEDDA.

There's nothing I can do to help you two?

JORGE.

Nothing I can think of. Turning his head. I trust to you to keep our Hedda entertained, my dear Brack.

BRACK.With a glance at HEDDA.

With the very greatest of pleasure.

HEDDA.

I 'm feeling wretched after this horrible day. I will go in and lie down in the music room.

JORGE.

You do that, dear--eh? Shows something to THEA. BRACK stirs fire.
HEDDA goes into the back room. A short pause.
Suddenly she is heard playing the Death March on the piano
.

THEA. Starts from her chair

Oh heavens! Music stops

JORGE. Moves over to curtains.

Dearest Hedda--don't play that tonight! Think of the dead!
Aunt Rina -- and Eilert Lovborg too.

HEDDA.Putting her head out between the curtains.

Don't forget General Gabler. Pause I will be quiet from now on.
HEDDA closes the curtains again. Sound of door locking

JORGE. Standing at the writing-table

It's not good for her to see us at this distressing work. She and Eilert were such good friends.
I have an idea, Mrs. Elvsted,--you shall take Rina's rooms at Aunt Julia's.
I will come over in the evenings. We can sit and work there -- eh?

HEDDA. Behind the curtains

How convenient for you, Jorgen Tesman.
How am I to get through my evenings alone in this mausoleum?

JORGE. Turning over the papers.

Oh, I daresay Judge Brack will be so kind as to look in on you now and then, even though I am out.

BRACK. In the armchair, calls out gaily.

Every blessed evening. I'll teach you to play chess, Mrs. Tesman!
We shall get on famously together, just we two!

HEDDA.Speaking loud and clear

Don't you flatter yourself, my dear judge.
A shot is heard within. JORGE, THEA, and BRACK leap to their feet.

JORGE

She 's playing with the General's old pistols again. Tries doorknob through curtains
She's locked this door. We'll have to go around to the hallway.
JORGE goes out UL followed by THEA.
BRACK goes up to try the door . He reaches for the knob
HEDDA steps through with an antique pistol.

JORGE Off left

The hall door's locked too.

HEDDA shoots BRACK below the waist.

BRACK.

Good God! - people don't do such things.
BRACK crumples on his side stage center facing upstage, shudders and dies.
HEDDA kneels, puts pistol in his hand, then stands above him..

JORGE Off

Hedda, Hedda! JORGE , THEA return
What this, eh? THEA screams, runs out
Eh?

HEDDA

Sit down. Your friend the Judge has just shot himself. Our Brack couldn't face the scandal.

JORGE Sitting in Thea's chair

Scandal?

HEDDA

At Mademoiselle Diana's. She was a -- friend of his. It was Brack who gave my other pistol to Eilert Lovborg, his protege. That's what we were talking about so quietly earlier.

JORGE

I heard a shot.

HEDDA

The General had a derringer. Totally inaccurate. It's on the piano. I thought it would get your attention. Kneels, searches BRACK's inner breast pocket. Pulls out mortgage. I knew he'd have this with him. Aunt Julia's mortgage. (To herself) In case he needed to threaten me with her house too. Looking through it. The only witness is Aunt Rina. Not very clever for a judge.

JORGE

I don't understand.

HEDDA Rising

You don't need to. Thea will be back with the police eventually, if she doesn't fall in the fjord. Just remember your place at the University is now assured--with Lovborg and Brack out of the picture.

JORGE Starts to rise

Perhaps I better go after Thea, eh?

HEDDA Facing him

And leave the mother of your child alone with a corpse!

JORGE Plunks down in chair

You're not --

HEDDA

Aunt Julia has a keen eye.
HEDDA goes to the stove, sits, tears and burns mortgage while talking
Now as for Mrs.Thea Elvsted --you understand that a respectable member of the University Faculty can't be seen associating with a woman who's left her husband and children for a man who's just committed suicide in a brothel.

JORGE Toying with papers

But Lovborg's wonderful book --

HEDDA Turns on stool by the stove

I'll help you with that--God knows I heard Eilert prattle on about his advanced ideas for years. Reaches under chair. We will have to rewrite this opus completely. Produces a manuscript

JORGE Rising

But you burned --

HEDDA Rising, cradling the papers

An embarrassing catalog of medieval French domestic habits. Even the scenery was boring, dear. After the baby comes, we'll take a proper trip.

JORGE

I --

HEDDA Crossing to him

Will be famous for uniting the late Eilert Lovborg's philosophic fantasies with sound scholarship. Just think of the fun you'll have, Jorge, finding historical instances. And you can cross-reference all that original material.

JORGE

Eh --

HEDDA

Paris! The Opera. Pause The Bibliotechque Nationale. JORGE sits down
Aunt Julia can mind the baby back here. Just let me do the talking.
HEDDA puts manuscript back under the chair from behind
We'll hide that until Thea's gone. Too bad Mrs. Elvsted has to stay around for Brack's inquest. She'll really want to leave after that kind of experience.

HEDDA starts "re-enacting"; starting upstage center

Here's what happened. I came back out here while you and Mrs. Elvsted were going around to the hall door. Judge Brack had already taken my other pistol from his pocket. He must have made off with the pair of them when he was here - as usual - this morning.  I asked him "Are you going to shoot me too?" I said "You'll really need a better story than the one about Lovborg. Mademoiselle Diana wouldn't be here to back you up and I'll be dead." Then I asked him -as a joke- "Why don't you shoot yourself just like your friend Eilert? And he did. But I won't go into the details. We'll just say I found him like this when I came out after I heard the second shot. The authorities will be eager to cover up the whole scandal.

Looking down at JORGE seated stunned at the table.

You have to admit your dear Brack had been acting strangely since we've come back -- always coming around here-- sponsoring Eilert Lovborg at the University!  When men reach a certain age without finding a partner --
Walks over and looks down at the pistol
I'm going to miss General Gabler's old pistols. I think I'll replace them with a nice pair of Colt revolvers - soon.
JORGE starts gathering up the papers as lights fade.

FINIS


HEDDA REDUX

production notes

A full-scale production of this interlude is probably pointless, though attention to props and careful staging to create period "realism" may help.

Costume.

HEDDA - A dark dress, period hairstyle will do. Try a shawl in the first part of the scene,>
JORGEN - A tweedy suit, a vest and period shirt collar. Glasses. Mourning band around his right jacket sleeve.
BRACK - A tailcoat if possible; he needs to look well-dressed. Evident jewelry. Don't overdo the villain look.
THEA - A shirtwaist. Small jacket. Her hair can be down. Maybe glasses.

Set

- Starting on a neutral, preferably black stage

Upstage center hang a set of heavy drawing room curtains, which hide the music room doors. Support on stands or hang from above. These don't need to draw but Hedda has to go in and out. Doorknob can be mounted on a movable black upright, swung upstage when exiting. Hedda puts this stand back on its marks, so Jorge can reach it to discover the door's been locked, Hedda then swings this out of the way for her final entrance. Put scrap rug on the bottom of the stand to avoid noise. The UL exit doesn't need any indication, though floral displays indicating upper corners of the set would be nice, with a third to mark the door to the garden.
The writing table UL can be a cardtable with a suitable green? cloth. Needs two plain side chairs. Avoid a kitchen look. Use best furniture feasible.

An oriental rug stage center would be nice. Would help with final focus

The armchair DR should be throne-like if possible. Can be made more period with antimacassars and a laprobe draped down (which will also hide the manuscript).

The hearthstool DR needs to high enough so Hedda can sit and rise gracefully. Cover or drape to work with the armchair.

The "stove" DR stage edge is indicated by a "brick" base and fire tools. Action with it should be carefully mimed. If possible, mount a red light in the base pointing up, which is turned on when stove is opened.

PROPS

Firetools - Upstage of "stove", period looking.
Pistol - Add weight (plasticene?) to plastic dueling toy. Should look real, finish with permanent marker.
Papers - Loose handwritten, discolored?? Use same ribbons on manuscript, which should look more orderly. It must fit under the armchair. Add period fringe to hide it if necessary. Mortgage has seals

SOUND

Gunshots -Starter pistol for off-stage, or fewer caps. Could be a clapper.
**Stage Manager's "sure-shot" for the real one.
Music - Piano at opening - A mazurka perhaps. Fade out on lights up.
- Death March - record this being played not especially well with too much pedal.
Doorlock - do live if possible. Experiment with metallic objects.

**Sure-Shot. Tape a roll of red caps to the head of a metal or fiberglass handled hammer. Use several layers of masking tape. Strike on a scrap of hardwood flooring. Wear a leather work glove and eye protection. Keep the fire extinguisher handy; watch out for sparks. Don't use in a dusty environment or close to flammable materials. Don't try hitting rolls of caps taped down; instead. use one hammer for each shot.